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Changing the Guard – Flash Fiction Story (191 words) live link 1st November 2013

November 1, 2013

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Changing the Guard

My 191 word Flash Fiction Story has gone live early today.

Follow this live link to read it over on Morgen Bailey’s Writing Blog.

http://morgenbailey.wordpress.com/2013/11/01/flash-fiction-friday-111-changing-the-guard-by-jane-risdon/

Do let me know what you think.  I wrote it for my writing group weekly competition whereby we had to write a short story in less than 200 words.  There was a photo of several people sitting at a long table, with one person giving what looked like a speech, which provided the theme and this is my effort.  I do hope you like it.

I know Morgen would appreciate seeing your comments and so do please let her know what you think as she has been (is) very supportive of me and just as I love reading your remarks here it would be great if you could leave some comments on her blog too.

Thanks so much for your support, always appreciated.

Jane.

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8 Comments
  1. Really enjoyed that, Jane 🙂

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  2. Heading over now Jane – My it has been a long day! I am trying to do a bit of catching up but seem to be slowing down.

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  3. Fabulous story, Jane! I love the twist at the end, and you do a really effective job of creating atmosphere in just such a short story.

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    • Thanks Margot…appreciated. I actually enjoy the challenge. I am pleased you got so much from the story. It was fun writing it.

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  4. Val permalink

    Wonderful Jane, you never cease to amaze me !!

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Please leave a reply and comment - your input is really appreciated. Thanks, Jane

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